Next Video with Changes

After reviewing all the Audience Feedback we recieved on what to improve, we have finally made our changes to suit our Audience's ideas. For example, we have cropped some clips so the black socks were no longer in any shots, as it didn't look visually pleasing or professional. We have also moved our video clips around, to change our narrative. We have started our video with sadder clips, in which our artist is looking back on her relationship at how it was in a bad place and upsetting, and as the video moves on she becomes happier and glad she is looking back on it, as it was so bad and how she is happy now she is moving on into a better life without him. This not only makes more sense as a whole, rather than a merging of happy and sad scenes but it also fits with our ideas of our Ancillary tasks which show our artists face looking back and looking forward. Now all our tasks show a continuity and story.