Me and my partner Laura, asked for some feedback from our target audience on our 3rd draft for Ancillary task 2. We know it needs some tweaking and adjustments to make it look more proffesional and we plan to work on this, but we wanted to get a certain idea on what exactly our audience thinks of our Advertisement.
The positive feedback we recieved was: It is really effective
Bold, very dramatic
The two faces look professinal
Very Eye-catching and proffesional effects
The comments made for improvements were: Couldn't see some of the writing
Some of the font could be darker
Need a year next to September
The writing needs to be enhanced
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