We have shown our ideas to a group of girls in our target audience and asked what they thought and the feedback we got was mainly negative. We anticipated this would be the case, as we didn't like it our selves. What we were trying to do was make our magazine advertisement colourful rather than, black and white similarly to our CD Cover, however from the comments we recieved we have changed our mind.
Negative Comments: Her name overlaps her head and doesn't look good
The colours don't work you can't read the font clearly
The dress is unflattering
She looks really pale
There's not enough text
The page doesn't look proportions
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